movie with story DUMB OR ACCEPTIONAL

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movie with story DUMB OR ACCEPTIONAL

Post  TheM47 on Thu Jul 10, 2008 1:54 am

It starts off with steve (cant think of names ) a low repped gang leader of the (Street Sweepers) is getting out of prison after after committing a murder. His right hand man (Fox) picks him up and drives him to his house in the third city. (talking about how it was in jail while driving) When Fox parks the car, their car gets robbed and as soon as fox gets out his car he tries to take away the convicts gun but gets killed. Later they give steve an ass beating until they think hes dead. He wakes up and just leaves the hospital, a week later he finds the killer at a burger shot and follows him into an alley then he makes him suffer and interrogate him. Then he thought about the sh*t he said, that he worked for the 45s gang, the meanest clique in the streets. Hoping no one would know, he goes to the first city to get away but the 45s follow him so he gets the street sweepers (SS) over while the 45s burn SSs hangout down then they have a street fight (no guns)Next, it is almost over and someone pulls out a pistol and starts shooting. Thats when the war between the Street Sweepers and 45s war begins.
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Re: movie with story DUMB OR ACCEPTIONAL

Post  docbrad on Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:42 pm

interesting.... could use some improvment but that was over-exeptional for a first script.
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